Feedback Thoughts

In this bog post I am going to be discussing constructive feedback. Constructive feedback is extremely important in anything you do, because it's how you improve. I will now discuss two articles that I recently read about ways to take criticism and how to improve yourself in the things you do.

The first article I read was Seven Ways to Crush Self-Doubt in Creative Work. I thought this article was good, because it had a lot of good tips. I thought this was also a good article, because self-doubt is something that almost everyone has especially when doing creative work. I also found myself relating with the author's own experience. For example, they discussed how they tried to make their work perfect and that's something I often find myself struggling with as well.

The second article I read was How to Tame Your Inner Critic: A Simple Habit to Rewire Your Brain. I liked this article, because it talked about how to deal with making mistakes. Instead of thinking you are a failure when you mess up the author instead introduces the idea of forgiving yourself for your mistakes and continuing on. Additionally, I like how the author talks about how mistakes aren't bad, but they lead to growth.

Beach

Storybook Topic Brainstorm

My first inspiration for a storybook idea is from Vali: The Downfall of  an Arrogant King. I have chosen this as a possible story. I am thinking about possibly writing about a king or a leader who gained power, and was a good ruler/leader, but through a series of events they begin to become bad until their eventual death or redemption as I have not yet decided how I would want this story to end.

The next possible storybook topic I my choose is possibly describing battles. This inspiration came from one of the project suggestions, and I thought it might be a cool one to do, because I would focus on a essentially a single event. What I mean is that instead of focusing on the politics and actions that led to the battle I would just focus solely on the battle similar to the movie Dunkirk. 

I am also thinking about making a story about my first storytelling blogpost. I kind of want to continue the story that I wrote, because I left it at somewhat of a cliff hanger. I could explore what happened after Dave rescued Einstein, and I could explore the events that happened that led Dave to mistrust Einstein. I think it could be a lot of fun, because even though it would be inspired by the epics I read, it would still be primarily  my own creation.

The final storybook topic I may write about is my idea of the retelling Indian history. I was inspired from the Wikipedia article that talked about Indian military history. I think there is a lot of potential in this, because I could retell battles or Indian history from the viewpoints of past kings or even the people living in India. Additionally, this could be a cool topic since India didn't use to be a unified country, so there will be plenty of topics to discuss.

Indian warfare

Week 2 Story: Rescuing Einstein

 It was a calm night when John Serpent was in view of the extraction zone. This was where he was supposed to meet the contact, a defecting scientist from the enemy militant group Gearhead. Normally John would have left this kind of task to someone else, but the defecting agent was someone special. John was to meet the the primary man responsible for the almost complete destruction of his squad nine years ago - Hue Einstein. And although one of the surviving members of the squad Zak Mills had tried to talk him out of allowing Hue back into the squad, stating that Hue couldn't be trusted, John acted against his better judgement and decided to help Hue defect.

As John sat thinking about the past he saw a figure approaching. It was Hue. Suddenly, all the pain from the events nine years ago came flooding back, but John held his composure. Hue was the first to speak, "You look different John ." Not wanting to make small talk John replied "It's time to go." John then put a black bag over Hue's head and searched him for tracking devices in order to make sure Hue still wasn't in contact with Gearhead. 

John then led Hue three miles to where the truck that would take them back to base was waiting. Before entering the truck Hue spoke up "I know you don't trust me John , but I want to clear my name from what happened nine years ago. I want to prove that I didn't betray the squad." John was silent,  but he hoped the scientist's words were truthful. On the trip back to base John thought back on all the good Hue had done as a member of their squad, and somewhat sadly he also knew that even if Hue hadn't been the one to betray them things would never be the same. And another thought still sat at the back of his head. What if Zak was right and Hue couldn't be trusted?

Author's notes: This story is based on "The Crocodile and the Monkey's Heart" in which the crocodile tries to trick the monkey into climbing onto his head so he can bring the monkey's heart to his wife so she can eat it. My take on the story is about two old comrades who are reunited after one of them allegedly betrayed the squad. This story, however, is not so black and white as it is never revealed if Hue did betray the squad, and it ends with John possibly remaking the same mistake.

Bibliography. "The Crocodile and the Monkey's Heart" from Eastern Stories and Legends by Maries L. Shedlock source

Hue Einstein

Reading Notes: Week 2 Anthology

The monkey and crocodile stories

• Told from the point of view of the crocodile and the monkey and then from the point of view of the Buddha
• The plot device driving the story both times is the wife of the crocodile wants to eat the heart of the monkey
• In the first story the monkey is somewhat fooled by the crocodile, because he rides on the crocodile to get to the island with better food. As a result, the monkey has to fool the crocodile to get out of the bad situation he put himself in
• In the second story the monkey has to fool the crocodile to get back to the island he normally stays on
• In both stories the monkey outwits the crocodile and the crocodile gives up

A crocodile waits for a monkey

Week 2 Reading Overview

 I have chosen to read the public domain edition of the Ramayan, because I like the idea of reading a book that was written by different authors. This way I can see how different people write differently and gain inspiration for my own storytelling by reading many different styles.

The first comic book that got my attention is Tales of Arjuna. This is because I like how it has a variety of different stories that do not necessary depend on the events of past stories. This is particularly interesting to me, because I know that each story will be unique. Also I thought the story about sacrificing ghee to Agni was somewhat comical.  The second comic book that got my attention is Parashurama, because it is a story that seems like it has a lot of action and drama. Additionally, it seems like the stakes are high, so I know I will really enjoy it.

The first video I really liked was Curating Krishna in the Garden of Assam. This video interested me, because I love going to museums to see and learn about different cultures. For example, when I go to museums I always try to read about every painting or artifact I see. The second video I liked was Ships of Ancient India, because it tells a concise yet informative history of India's trade relations and how they traded. I especially liked it too, because I am interested in history and learning about what people did in the past.

Sacrifice to Agni