Wednesday, February 17, 2021
Week 4: Meat Restaurant
Monday, February 15, 2021
Reading Notes: PDE Ramayana Part D
Rama had a bridge built to get to Lanka. Although it seems like it would be easier to just build boats instead of a bridge. It also seems like Ravana's pride is the cause of his downfall. This plot point would make for an interesting story. Also for some reason Ravana tried to make Sita think that Rama was dead. I did not really like how Rama is crazy powerful to the point where nothing was really at stake. Throughout the story there is never any question if Rama is going to win, but during the battle it starts to somewhat feel like a battle where both sides suffer and we really see Rama struggling to win. As a result, I want to make my stories have the hero struggle and even lose at times.
Ravana being sad about his sons death is somewhat similar to how Achilles is sad in The Illiad when Patroclus dies. And Ravana decides to go on a rampage as well. I do not really like how Hunaman is able to just keep going to the Himalayas super quickly to revive the warriors who died. It was interesting how Rama tested Sita to make sure she was faithful to him, and although it looked like he was being unreasonable at first I think he knew that she was faithful so she would be able to pass the trial.
I thought it was dumb that Sita was exiled by Rama. Especially because she went into exile with Rama on her own will, it kind of stings that she was forced into exile.
Reading Notes: PDE Ramayana Part C
Sugriva and Rama have many similarities. They both have been exiled and have had their wife stolen from them. Vali was trapped in a cave because of Sugriva despite Sugriva having good intentions. It would be interesting to write a story similar to this one in which there is a misunderstanding that causes a power struggle among former friends. The fight between two brothers like when Vali and Sugriva fought could also be a good story.
It would be interesting to have a story where the hero helps someone and then that person ends up not fulfilling his promise. Hanuman finds Sita who looks sad and sick and she refuses to be Ravana's husband. Sita refused to be saved by Hanuman. It would be interesting to have a story where someone refuses to be saved out of pride and that choice is their downfall.
It does not make a lot of sense why Ravana did not kill Hanuman even though he was an "envoy". Hanuman was clearly not an envoy anymore once he started killing Ravana's guards. And Hanuman then set half of Lanka on fire. Additionally, Ravana's brother decided to ally himself with Rama.
Week 14 Story: Nine Years Ago
This is a prequel to my week 2 story Rescuing Eli which takes place nine years before. In the year 1975 there were once two mercenaries nam...
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Hi I am Caleb Lagge and I am a junior studying computer engineering and mathematics. I chose to study these topics, because I like coding an...
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This is a prequel to my week 2 story Rescuing Eli which takes place nine years before. In the year 1975 there were once two mercenaries nam...


